For some reason I can't see your attachment, so can't offer
help with the circuit, but would suggest you have a look here

http://members.misty.com/don/bulb1.html

for information about dimming halogens, which aren't like
normal filament bulbs. The halogen cycle was covered in a
thread some time ago and will be in the archives

hth

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